You will not ask, I will not say,
The memories they just fade away.
Sometimes it seems that Sorrow speaks,
For longing claims the root of it.
Maybe never, maybe ever,
our dreams remain distant.
For what can come from it you say?
Ashes to ashes, dust to dust.
Does it make sense to anyone? Feel like asking for a critical analysis of it, but it's not exactly a good poem so i wonder if the central themes are clear. Oh, in case you don't know, i wrote it. Don't know why it has to rhyme because i don't really like end-rhymes. Too common and often misused. Internal rhymes are beautiful. and I love alliteration.
Literature as my new ge??? but i like languages too... French, German... not jap.. too many jap anime fans. I think i'd die if i learn with them. lousy me. Why is time limited and timetables funny????
I need a good poem. How i miss you all, Ms K & Mrs Tan!
Ciaoz
dreamt of @ 8:54 am
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certain quotes from certain places..
"Blessed is the man who perseveres under trials because when he stood the test, he will receive the crown of life that God has promised to those who love Him." James 1:12
"Oh, nothing can happen more than once,
But all things must happen one day
Over hill and dale, over wood and stream,
My dying voice will blow away... " The Neverending story "Walk by Faith, Not by sight" 2 Corinthians 5:7
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